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		<title>Time traveller’s diary</title>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 Mar 2009 20:44:16 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Linda Schoales</dc:creator>
		
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		<description><![CDATA[“Timely Persuasion” is the story of a time-traveller figuring out how to use his new-found powers in order to save his sister.&#160; After his initial fumbling attempts to determine how his “blinking” works, he becomes determined to change his sister’s past.&#160; Things become complicated when he begins meeting other versions of himself.

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		<title>Unfortunately, I don&#8217;t need more persuasion&#8230;</title>
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