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Tomorrow Girl in Bismarck by Sean Arnold

a ture crime superhero story 

Tomorrow Girl was almost part of the greatest superhero team of all time then the universe was destroyed. She is now in the boring non-superhero world of Bismarck North Dakota.

The events of this story are true. It occurred in North Dakota in 2010. The names have been changed to protect the victims. Everything else has been told exactly as it happened.

Note: Tomorrow Girl in Bismarck contains some graphic violence and harsh language.

A serialized novel, updating sporadically

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Listed: May 14, 2018

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The Events of this Story are True, Apparently

By Megajoule, author of The Warlock Ruthless

May 30, 2018: Note: This is part of a review swap, but I endeavor to be honest nonetheless.

My first impression of Tomorrow Girl in Bismark was shaky. There are some grammatical and structural issues that initially turned me off the story, but I powered through thanks to some very funny turns of phrases, and I realized what I’d initially taken for issues seemed to be a purposeful play at surrealism.

The surrealism is not [more . . .]


Is Tomorrow Girl Worth Today?

By Hejin57, author of Music Masters

May 29, 2018: Once again, we enter the world of superheroes. Capes and powers are a popular subject, and it’s no surprise.

Unlike the majority of superhero fiction filling the net these days, Tomorrow Girl is a much more light-hearted romp into the world of four-color Jack Kirby superheroes.

It begins with destruction of the homeworld of Joss Jones, otherwise known as Tomorrow Girl, the sidekick to Tomorrow Man who is known by many as [more . . .]

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A Garmonbozia Masterpiece

By SovereignofAshes, author of The Vorrgistadt Saga

May 24, 2018: Disclaimer: This review was done as part of a review swap.

First Impressions: Well, golly geez there, eh? What do you get when you mix the Golden Age of Comics with a disc-worth of a drunk Ex-CIA Analyst’s memoirs thrown together with a damn fine cup of coffee? You get this story, surely. Whether you’re still hyped for Aldous Huxley to write Alice in Wonderland as a political warning, or you’re waiting for Hunter S. Thompson to finish writing up the [more . . .]

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