First, I wish to thank those who have commented on this story. The critiques have been very helpful.

However, I do wish to comment on one criticism in particular: the breaking of Chapters into sub-parts. In all honesty, this is done to reduce the size of the specific postings to roughly 1,000 words from the 8,000-15,000 word chunks that would take an average reader 10-15 minutes to read.

I am aware that the online attention span of the average computer user is roughly 5 minutes. With chapters exceeding 10,000 words in particular, a reader is likely to move away from the site in boredom before completing the chapter. If you suggest I should consolidate these chapters, then I will do so.

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