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By Taulsn, author of Reaper

Aug 21, 2015: I wrote this review after reading the first 22 chapters, August 21, 2015.

Let’s start with the basics, grammar normally I don’t judge grammar I tend to suck at times. However, I feel the need to state that Void Domain doesn’t seem to suffer any of the usual mistakes. It also doesn’t have any noticeable typos. The website is fine easy to read. What I’m trying to say is that there is nothing annoying/distracting to get in the way of the story.

The story is pretty damn good. Despite being set in a school, it takes a while to get there. Not that I mind the time is taken to develops Eva’s character, and it’s well done. Although she does seem to act older than her age. The rest of the cast don’t fall prey to the teen drama cliches, and while there is a certain amount of angst it’s justified.

All in all I’m having fun reading it and will continue to do so.

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