The Cons:

• Page design needs work. The font is small, although most browsers will let you change this yourself.  It’s just annoying to have to do.  I’d also rather not have to gloss over the character bios in the left-hand column on every page; they just don’t seem important to have there.  The link for the next page is also very small and took a confused moment to find.

• The writing is reasonably solid, but could use some editing.  There are more careless errors than I expect, which makes me think posts might only get a once through by the author before posting.

The Pros:

• Tongue-in-cheek modern fantasy.  Much closer in style to Pratchett than Rowling.

• Paul Craig is seriously prolific.  If he’s writing this as he goes, I am extremely impressed.

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