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By Typist Kid, author of The Zone

Feb 1, 2018: I don’t know where to start, honestly. I enjoyed the story, and it’ll go on to the list of web serials I read.

It’s beautiful. The world. I’ve read up to the tenth chapter and love what I’ve read so far. I can tell you that if you’re looking for something quick, and interesting, this is it. The grammar is neat. The characters done properly.

There is a main plot, and it moves about nicely. You learn various tidbits about the world in each chapter. Sometimes I think I see hints hidden but that could just be me. The magic isn’t really explained in depth, and I’d like to know more, but for many people it could be the opposite. I have, after all, a lot of different opinions about things. I’m not about to impose them on anybody.

All in all, I enjoyed the story. It’s new and refreshing to me. I’d say that it’s something you should try out.

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