Apr 17, 2009: The site is well-designed, the story thought out carefully, and the writing is a grammar nut’s wet dream. With all of that going for it, you’d expect the actual action to be crap. Nope . . . dialogue rings true, description is concise, action is beautifully paced. Damn. Chris Poirier is a bloody good writer, and this serial has me hooked. And I’m happy about it. Give it a whirl, folks, whatever your reading preferences. You’ll probably be very pleasantly surprised.