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No More Ramen by Drew Hayes

 

No More Ramen is a fiction story set in the modern day.  There are no monsters or magic, unless of course you count the mystical elixir produced by the sage known as Jose Cuervo.  It is the story of college student who wins a record lottery jackpot, only to decide he prefers his life the way it is.  Instead of rolling over and accepting fate he comes up with a scheme to keep his secret, and his millions.

Note: No More Ramen contains some graphic violence and harsh language.


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Listed: Feb 27, 2009

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Not a self help book

Editor: Sarah Suleski
March 29, 2009

I once came across a self help book at the library titled "No More Ramen."  I believe it had to do with managing finances, and it was geared towards twenty-somethings.  When I saw this listing that self-help book was the first thing that leapt to mind.  But one look at the premise and one can be assured that this story is no self-help book about managing finances.  It may not be fantastical in the elves, vampires, and steampunk sense, but it is pretty fantastical.

It’s the story of an average joe who happens to win the lottery the first time he ever bothers to buy a ticket, and who, instead of reveling in his new found riches, goes to great and awkward lengths to keep his fortune a secret.

There are times when No More Ramen stretches its credibility a bit far—mainly, the entire premise.  But it’s a comedy, a fairly light-hearted and affectionate look at college life, and doesn’t ever take itself or characters too seriously.  It reminds me of a Judd Aptow movie, though the jokes aren’t quite as funny and there’s a certain lack of shenanigans so far.  Still, I can see a younger Seth Rogan playing the role of Seth.

I’ve been following it since the listing was added to WFG, and so far it’s definitely a readable story.  There are usually a lot of typos when each chapter goes live, but it’s nothing a bit of proof reading won’t clear up.  Sometimes the first person narrator spends too much time explaining, or jokes have too much set up to be snappy, but overall it’s an easy, fun read, especially on an update by update basis.

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Member: sara greenwald
February 27, 2009

This is a quick, light read that delivers exactly what the author’s summary promises.

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