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Shattered Remnants of a Dream by Dan Luffey

 

An epic sci-fi/adventure tale dealing with parallel dimensions, ancient powers, and the warping of space and time through one young man’s eyes.

Note: Shattered Remnants of a Dream contains pervasive graphic violence; also, some harsh language.


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Listed: Mar 19, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
March 19, 2010

The first chapter is well-written.  The story starts right away with a young man crouched behind a display case trying to duck the bullets flying around the room.  The jumps between point of view are a little bit rough.

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Member: Karmie
March 19, 2010

I’ve been reading this web fiction since it began and it is a fairly solid piece of work.  What captivated me when I first began reading were the new worlds, physical laws, powers, and races. It’s not easy to create a universe from scratch, but this story does it (and does it well).  The characters are detailed enough that they [more . . .]

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Impressive.

Member: Sarratum
March 21, 2010

Just by chance, I happened to come across "Shattered Remnants of a Dream" by casually browsing the recently vetted.

Then, I read the first sentence:

"Vance Dancougar decided then and there that diving behind a glass case during a drive-by wasn’t the [more . . .]

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Cannot recommend enough

Member: Quetz
May 26, 2010

SROAD is unique in that the writer makes a conscious effort to painstakingly create an entirely separate universe with just enough in common with the real world to keep it from being overwhelming.  The scale and scope of the story can only be described as epic, and the characters are numerous and believable.  Each character is very different from the [more . . .]

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