With only three chapters to date it’s not easy to form an opinion about this story.  The seeds are there for a great adventure and I am interested enough to see how they grow.

The main character is likeable and there’s a sense of fun which hints that this could turn out to be a relaxing read. 

I’m not too keen on the site layout.  Personally I prefer the main text to be blocked with line breaks between paragraphs. 

There are a number of typos but nothing that can’t easily be corrected.

My rating is based on the fact that this story has only been posting for a few weeks and is just beginning.  I will be happy to revise it and my review when there is a bit more to it.

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