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CATHERINE

Editor’s First Impression

Editor: Linda Schoales
November 25, 2009

Starts with a bang, so to speak.  Fairly explicit sex and violence in the Prologue.  Possibly psychopathic narrator.  Probably not for the faint of heart.

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SERVICING THE POLE

Stark

Member: Khelden Iituem
November 15, 2009

If Servicing the Pole can be summed up in one word, it is just that; stark.  From the uncompromising prose to the embittered views of the protagonist to the repeated, soul-crushing pathos of the story itself.

Shaw plays with the reader like a cat with a mouse.  The unnamed protagonist finds herself repeatedly in unpleasant situations and tries desperately to hold herself to moral standards.  Rather than showing a victory for the protagonist in her successes, Shaw emphasises the continual self-doubt whenever the protagonist manages to prevail.  The main contention she faces is the belief (contrary to nearly every other character) that stripping is not the same as prostitution. 

Although she skirts close (very close) to the border, our heroine manages to avoid actually taking that last step across it – and suffers.  We are repeatedly treated to images of the glory and success of those women in the story who just give in and accept payment for sex, of the corrupt ownership of the club who passively encourage it, and of how much the protagonist loses out in exchange for the tattered rags of her self image.

Worse yet is that we are treated to glimpses of her hopes and dreams, a childhood desire to be a musician.  She is repeatedly told she has talent and on several occasions seems to get the opportunity to escape her life and follow her dream – only to have it cruelly ripped away from her as a result of her chosen employment.

In such stories, we might expect the supporting cast to suffer as a result of the focus on the main character.  Not so here.  Characters who might initially appear simple foils often develop into compelling individuals in their own right, from the little signs such as the club owner’s generosity to the old girls to striking episodes such as the sometimes-boyfriend’s confrontation with the protagonist on his belief that there is no line between stripping and prostitution, or the fellow stripper’s unnerving reaction of almost childlike denial to abuse by a client in a private session gone wrong.

Servicing the Pole is not a kind story, but it will keep you wanting more.  You might need ice cream and a good cry once you’re finished, though.

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SERVICING THE POLE

A great, merciless read

Member: Christine Hall Volkoff
October 22, 2009

I like grey and gritty stories, and this is an excellent one. Lauri describes the life of an exotic dancer, with honesty, no self-pity, and with a strange detachment which I recognize from having had acquaintances who were sex workers. It explores with eyes wide open the fine line between pole/lap dancing and prostitution in the mind of the clients, and it seems from reading it, that the protagonist has given up on the idea that love and sex can sometimes work together. It is a feat to make the reader see this, and offer a glimpse into a real if grimy world, in full consciousness.

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