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SAND CASTLE

Ok, I’m Hooked…

By illlogicmedia, member

Nov 13, 2013: Wow, just wow.

It has been a while since I’ve read a mind bending action packed book. Every page leaves you wanting more. I blew through the first 13 pages with ease.

If the author keeps this up, I will no doubtedly be hooked until the ending. So far the mystery, the probability, the sheer craziness catches your imagination. You can feel the the tension build up within yourself.

I even appreciate the few jocular jabs between characters in the story, very funny stuff. The other Interactions pull at your heartstrings in a way that doesn’t leave a man feeling less macho.

I have no idea what "Sand Castle" even eludes to from the story’s plotline, but it has grabbed my imagination and is not letting go anytime soon. I will be looking forward for more.

I recommend this work of fiction. Keep it up Ayami!

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SAND CASTLE

Editor’s First Impression

By Fiona Gregory, editor

Nov 13, 2013: A simple wait at a bus station, some scary and mysterious texts on a man’s phone, and all hell breaks loose. Luckily Dylan seems to be a good man in an emergency, but he decides not to trust the author of the texts. Is that the right decision?

So far this story is promising – action packed and unpredictable. I think I like Ayami’s writing more with each new offering. "Sand Castle" has an ambitious concept with a lot of potential and my ultimate satisfaction with this story will depend on how well it plays out.

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