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The Bentlefay Papers by Kathy Monahan

From the archives of an imaginary kingdom located on the Sarcastro Sea. 

A fiction serial in epistolary form about the imaginary kingdom of Bentlefay, with particular reference to its royal family and their retainers.  At the center of it all is Crown Princess Dulcie—young, beautiful, sought-after, and hating every minute of it.  Will Bentlefay repel the attacks of neighboring Marshweather?  Will the princess ever get porridge for breakfast when she wants it?  Will she ever fall in love and act like a normal girl for once?  There’s only one way to find out.


A serialized novel, updating twice weekly

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Listed: Nov 17, 2009

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Editor: Linda Schoales
November 17, 2009

The first chapters are solid and look interesting.  They consist of letters written between various characters.  The story sounds like it’s going to be fun.

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Definitely Readable, if a bit distant.

Member: Von
September 28, 2011

This book is very readable. Light, but readable.

The ‘collection of letters’ scheme is not my favorite, and succeeds here onl y with novelty interest. I am reasonably sure I would like the book more if it was more conventionally written.

The story, on the other hand, is one of those odd collection of ‘just bizarre enough to be fake, but just real enough to be almost true’ kind of thing that can still drag you along. The author needs, IMO, to do a good deal more showing than telling, the ‘letter’ scheme is a bit of a handicap for her in that light. All too many of the tensions exist only in black and white and not in the ‘reality’ of the story.

I personally find the erstwhile main character difficult to relate to, and find the secondary character much more likeable.

All in all, readable, if you like that kind of thing.

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