I first came across this story in a webzine and fell instantly in love with it. I found it again through some snooping, in all its full length glory.

The writing was very easy to read, the characters were so colorful I didn’t even need to look at the character page to know what they looked like and I finished the story much quicker than I thought. It proceeds at a pace that is suitable for action but does not lag so much on detail. I can only best liken it to a very well made first person shooter. You see the action through the eyes of the character, including all the things that happen to him, but at the same time you can definitely sympathize with what happens to the other characters. (For reference, I suggest reading "Chickens In The Mist" where this is best portrayed.)

Most importantly, I loved how well written the romance is. It’s easy to relate to but at the same time not at all bothersome.

All in all, I thoroughly enjoyed reading all 11 available chapters and patiently await what happens next to Jeff and Kenny.

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