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Disgruntled Spaceman by Jon

Marooned on a Boring Planet 

Having crash-landed on the most boring planet in the universe, a disgruntled spaceman struggles to survive.  As he attempts to adjust to his new environment, he recalls moments from his past and the events that led to his current predicament.

Note: Disgruntled Spaceman contains some graphic violence and harsh language.


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Listed: Jun 19, 2009

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Member: Von
November 7, 2009

This is written with a difficult viewpoint; a series of journal entries. This is a tempting format to use, but, as we see here, it makes for difficult reading. In addition he has chosen a very difficult verb tense, making the reading doubly difficult.

The log entries really need dates and times. That is one of the real advantages of that format.

I will look forward to seeing how this turns out.

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