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Hades Rising by Cory Cramer

 

Hades Rising is an original fictional universe created by author Cory Cramer.  The stories you’ll find in Hades Rising blend the excitement of pulp-era adventure, mystery, and romance novels, with the depth of character found in more contemporary literature.


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Listed: Jul 27, 2008

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Fails to Rise

Editor: Grace McDermott
August 20, 2008

(Review written after reading the first 10 chapters).

There was just something preventing me from getting in Hades Rising. The opening is solid – but since we’ve just been introduced to the characters, it is hard to be worried for them and the mortal danger they’re in. We get a bit from the father’s perspective, but since both parents are lost to the sea by the end of the chapter, it seems a little pointless. And confusing.

The following chapters are more linear, if slow – we establish where she is, that there’s a cute male nurse, and that she takes a shower. (A line of description in that section bothers me – it’s been established that it’s cold – hence, goosebumps and . . . erect nipples. I do not want to be thinking about the nipples of a girl who was just in a shipwreck. It just seems unecessary).

She gets the backpack that her father thrust on her in the first chapter – containing a plethora of items, which could be of importance, or just red herrings to think about – as well a diary.

It’s at this point where the story drops into flashbacks. There’s a demon for a moment, then it’s simply about a man trying to escape a murder rap.

There’s nothing wrong with the writing style, but at the same time, there was nothing compelling me to continue reading.

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Member: Katie
August 21, 2008

As the above reviewer stated, the beginning of Hades Rising is solid. Then it gets a little rough, with lots of dialogue. After a few chapters it gets awesome again.

When she starts reading the diary (that’s the ‘flashbacks’ the above reviewer mentioned), we don’t see much of Lilly for a [more . . .]

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Member: morrighannyx
August 28, 2008

While the story needs a bit of polishing, it is an entertaining daily read. I enjoy the different perspectives Cory uses, however this can be confusing at times. It’s hard to understand the actual plot and how it relates to the girl. I do recommend the story though! Each chapter is better than the last as Cory learns

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Fast Paced Adventure ai its finest!!

Member: noigeloverlord
August 21, 2008

If you want adventure with a twist you def. should read Cory Cramer!! Hades Rising is one of my fav reads this year!!

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