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Mr. Abernathy by Tony Delgrosso

 

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In 1944, Willy Horvitz was a brilliant young physicist.  Fervently anti-Nazi, he was coerced into leading a research and development effort to design and build a revolutionary new aircraft to turn the tide of the war.  Adopted as an orphaned American boy by a wealthy German industrialist, Willy was haunted throughout his life by the tragic loss of his mother.  The kind of loss he hoped wouldn’t be repeated if the personal secrets of those he held dear were revealed.

In 2008, Parker Dundee is a brilliant but unhappy young professor.  While sifting through the possessions of his recently deceased father, Parker makes an unsettling discovery: his father was far more than the mid-level State Department bureaucrat he always portrayed himself to be.  The deeper Parker gets into the labyrinth of his father’s secret life, the more attention he draws from sinister quarters.

Tying them together is the elusive “Mr. Abernathy”, a man known only through enigmatic references in scattered documents and journals spanning more than 100 years.  His identity and secrets are of intense interest to the CIA, Russian thugs, and a mysterious band of men known only as The Joneses.

Determined to know who his father really was, Parker realizes he must first solve a larger and far more dangerous puzzle: who was Mr. Abernathy?


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Who is Mr. Abernathy?

Editor: Linda Schoales
January 27, 2009

“Mr. Abernathy” is an intense, convoluted thriller with a science fiction slant.  The action moves easily between modern-day America, WWII-era Germany, and other settings, tracing three stories.  By the time the various plots converge the author has mixed history, physics, folklore and spies into the tangled web.

Parker Dundee is a History professor who has come home to bury his father.  While going through his father’s things he discovers several boxes of papers pertaining to his father’s job with the State Department.  He grabs the one box marked personal and takes it home with him.  As he goes through the papers he discovers parts of his father’s life that he never knew about.

Willy Horvitz is a brilliant young physicist working in Berlin in 1944.  He’s a theoretical physicist but his work has come to the attention of the SS, who insist on his help developing new weapons for the Third Reich.  He has secrets of his own that make him vulnerable to coercion by the Nazi’s. 

Mr. Abernathy is a mysterious figure who appears throughout the story.  He seems to be important to both men.  He’s also of interest to a number of other parties. 

The writing is solid, nicely paced and detailed.  There were enough technical details to be interesting but not enough to slow down the narrative.  I don’t have enough of a background in physics, engineering or aeronautics to judge the accuracy of the details, but they read well.  Each chapter ends with enough of a teaser to draw the reader forward, without being melodramatic.  The main characters were well drawn, well rounded and believable.  Some of the secondary characters verged on stereotypes but they were memorable.  Some of the characters were ciphers but they helped add to the tension.  The narrative switches between perspectives and time periods smoothly.  It’s quite easy to determine whose story is being told because Parker’s story is told in first person, while the others are told in third person. 

I did figure out the mysteries before they were explained but I still thought "Mr. Abernathy" was a great story with an intriguing premise and a satisfying resolution.  I really enjoyed spending time with the characters.  If you enjoy mysteries or thrillers with a touch of science fiction and science, you’ll love this.

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Nazis and Secretive Documents

Editor: Morgan O'Friel
October 9, 2008

As a head’s up: this site currently only has two chapters available. This review is subject to change as more of the work is released. Now, onto the review.

Both the website and the PDF files are very professional—they come off as concise, evocative, and moody, which is also the general [more . . .]

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