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Take a Lemon by Russell Gold

 

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Marsh Steen’s life has been completely upended by a science experiment gone wrong.  The college sophomore is trying to cope while waiting for the effects to be reversed – but the experimenters seem to have vanished . . . 


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Note: Take a Lemon contains some harsh language.

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Listed: Jul 12, 2009

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Editor: Chris Poirier
July 12, 2009

Narrative voice is engaging, though perhaps a little rambling.  Still, a good start, and I’ll be reading more.  Rating may increase at that time.

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Long Orange Tentacles

Member: Von
August 14, 2009

Please note that my rating is two stars, but not because this book is a ‘tough slog’. The star system does not at all reflect the way I rate a book. Please read my review for an explanation of my rating.

(!!Warning, this review includes spoilers!!)

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Marsh Madness

Member: browser58
July 13, 2009

Not bad beginning – have to see where it goes from here.  I think a ‘rambling’ start is appropriate for the subject.  I am looking forward to seeing where the author takes this one – so many possibilities, so little time.

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