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The Lifting of the Veil by Chris Tejeda

As most of the world is destroyed and nothing remains to fight for, Thomas Hayward leads a group of survivors against the forces that now populate Earth.  Desperately, against a toxic land and a soulless enemy, he tries to lead them toward the one location that may hold answers—the final resting place of the Roswell ’47 crash saucer and its . . .

A serialized novel, updating weekly.
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A Town Called Disdain by Dan Leo

A sprawling fantastic tale of the ’60s, supposedly written by “legendary” B-movie director Larry Winchester. . . .

A complete novel.
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Timely Persuasion by Jacob LaCivita

A Rock & Roll Time Travel Adventure

Timely Persuasion follows an anonymous music critic on a quest to save his sister from the relationship that ended her life.  After a chance encounter at a bowling alley leaves him with the ability to travel in time, our hero uses his musical knowledge to “blink” through the years attempting to keep the couple apart by any means necessary.  But . . .

A complete novel.
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TIMELY PERSUASION

Unfortunately, I don’t need more persuasion…

Editor: Gavin Williams
October 1, 2008

There is a too-often cited "writing tip" and that is "show, don’t tell."  The idea is, you write a scene to "show" readers what you mean, instead of "telling" them. 

So, in simplistic terms, you don’t tell them "he was a nice guy," you show a nice guy:

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