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By Ace, author of Knave

Apr 17, 2014: I’ll start this review off by saying this serial is still pretty new, only 7 chapters posted currently so anything I say may not be relevant later.

Each chapter is fairly short, whether that’s a good or bad thing depends on personal taste. The writing is solid although it does have typos and tense troubles here and there.

The story is set in the future and the writer does a good job of showing that in the characters’ day to day life. It’s pretty science-y and the author (I think) does their best to make it realistic. (Don’t quote me, I’m not an expert)

There’s usually at least two scene changes within each chapter, which makes it feel kind of bumpy and not smooth. The relationship between the two main characters is also hard for me to wrap my head around sometimes. They’ve only really became friends very, very recently yet seem to trust each other a great deal. This is probably something that will be fixed once more chapters are out and they get more developed.

Overall, pretty interesting story with good potential. Pick this up if superpowers and science are your thing.

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No title

By Ace, author of Knave

Apr 17, 2014: I’ll start this review off by saying this serial is still pretty new, only 7 chapters posted currently so anything I say may not be relevant later.

Each chapter is fairly short, whether that’s a good or bad thing depends on personal taste. The writing is solid although it does have typos and tense troubles here and there.

The story is set in the future and the writer does a good job of showing that in the characters’ day to day life. It’s pretty science-y and the author (I think) does their best to make it realistic. (Don’t quote me, I’m not an expert)

There’s usually at least two scene changes within each chapter, which makes it feel kind of bumpy and not smooth. The relationship between the two main characters is also hard for me to wrap my head around sometimes. They’ve only really became friends very, very recently yet seem to trust each other a great deal. This is probably something that will be fixed once more chapters are out and they get more developed.

Overall, pretty interesting story with good potential. Pick this up if superpowers and science are your thing.

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