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Last Mage by Andrew Eckhart

To let nothing harm this world. 

Seventeen years ago the world ended with the occurance of the Event. Many questions still remain from that time, including and especially just how the world was restored. The Mage Elijah Valentine is finally ready to talk about that time and reveal the secrets he’s been holding for millenia. More than just a worker of wonders, advisor to kings and figure of history Elijah is this world’s protector. And he is the last of his kind.

Join the Writer as he delves deep into this new world of demons, ancient cities and technology and the truth about the end of the world.

Note: Last Mage is unfinished, and will likely remain so.  It contains some graphic violence and harsh language.


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Listed: May 2, 2010

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Editor’s First Impression

By Linda Schoales, editor

May 2, 2010: The first chapter is well-written. The story starts off in first person, then switches to third person to give some background on the story. The main character made me think of Dr. Strange, if he’d been talked into having a high-powered, corporate office, and regularly got threats for not doing enough for the world.

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WIZARD

By G.S. Williams, author of No Man An Island

May 7, 2010: Elijah Valentine is a mage, and apparently the last of his kind. He’s been around since at least the time of George Washington, doing what he can to see the big picture and keep the world from getting too out of control.

However, this isn’t a black and white story where being an all-powerful wizard is easy, heavens no. The story starts with a scene where a woman attempts to assassinate Valentine for not solving drought in Africa. He has to [more . . .]

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Outstanding!

By HuMJah, member

Aug 31, 2010: This is possibly one of my favorite reads each week. I look forward to seeing that a new update has been released. I’m finding the sort of excitement in reading that our parents and grandparents must have found in serialized stories in magazines, in a way that has been previously been limited to television series for me. This is simply compelling. It’s not just a monster of the day story; you’re also exploring the story of the characters telling the story, how they came together, and what makes them who [more . . .]

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