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Touched by Zoe E. Whitten

Has Amber really been touched by a daemon, or has she just become touched in the head? 

Amber McKenzie considers herself a normal, if somewhat bland-looking college student.  Then one morning, she feels the touch of something cold and evil, something she can’t see or explain.

Amber barely has time to reflect on it before she attacked in the bathroom by her best friend.  She comes home and finds her family slaughtered, forcing her to rely on the dubious protection of a D&D “mage” and a woman who may, or may not be a real vampire.

Is Amber losing her mind, or is she really being stalked by a daemon?  And if it is real, will the help of her unusual new friends be enough to save Amber from the cold clutches of her invisible enemy?

Part of the Mystical World Wars series, Touched marks one of several “entry points” into the fictional world.  This story introduces readers to the MWW series, and to characters Amber McKenzie, Marcus/Jenny Wrigley and Vicky.  This was originally posted as a serial novella in 2007, and has undergone 1 minor revision since publication.


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Listed: Jan 30, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
January 30, 2010

First chapter is solid, if a bit descriptive.  We get the backstory of Amber’s mixed family and the description of the "hole" in her memory.

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Sometimes it feels like you’re being stalked by crazy…

Member: Kyt Dotson
April 23, 2010

“No, anybody but him. He’s only the weirdest one out of the entire anime club, and he’s smelly.” A story world-willing because sometimes the best aid comes from the strangest places.

While the first chapter appears to have a bit of a slow start, it manages to donkey punch expectations in [more . . .]

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Good dark fantasy

Member: Shutsumon
February 3, 2010

Touched by Zoe E. Whitten was one of the first Novellas the author posted on her website back in 2007. I read and enjoyed it at that time. Since then she has edited it, and the revisions have only served to improve it.

The story is tense and exciting as Amber [more . . .]

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