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Nona Umbra by Virginia Ruth

 

In the August of their twelfth year, Will Colven and Gaby Rice were hunted by invisible hounds.  Under the care of Will’s family, they fled from town to town, from motel to motel, unable to rest, unable to seek help.  Their separation ended the hunt, but not the questions.  Who was after them?  What did they want?  What other kinds of nightmare creatures existed in the cracks of human perception, and when might one attack?

Now, three years later, it is time to answer the questions.  Armed with the strange, unexplored gifts that marked them as friends in early childhood, fortified by their confidence in each other, they set out to solve the riddles and end the fear that still haunts both their families.  But every answer leads to a deeper riddle, every shadow conceals a darker nightmare, until they find themselves entangled in a conflict as old as humanity itself.

That wouldn’t be so bad; it’s nice to have scope for one’s talents.  But in the course of pursuing their answers, they fall victim to the one fate neither of them would have dreamed of, and it threatens to tear them both apart.


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Excellent

Editor: Sarah Suleski
February 12, 2009

(10/30/09) Note:

Nona Umbra has one complete "Book" to its name and a few chapters into Book 2.  Book 1 was excellent and Book 2 continues the trend.  Upping the rating to 5 stars.  One of my favorite web serials.

(02/12/09) Original review:

Seven chapters (and four supplemental pieces) into Nona Umbra and so far there is nothing I don’t like about this story.

I was tempted to give it a full five star rating and only one thing held me back—I don’t know the middle or the end of the story yet, so I can’t judge the entire piece yet.  (I’ve read 5 star beginnings that didn’t deliver all the way, or were abandoned before completion).

I’m giving it a 4.5 for a solid beginning and the potential to be an excellent tale.  So far, I love where it’s going.  The premise set up in the synopsis intrigued me, and then the story pulled me in and kept me clicking ahead till I exhausted available updates.

The writing is good, the characters are interesting, and the mystery behind the events of the past makes for an intriguing plot.  But what I really enjoy about the story is the way the author unfolds the backstory effortlessly, and also expresses the different moods and feelings that the characters are experiencing.  The loneliness, confusion, fear, and longing that Gaby and Will feel is illustrated perfectly.  I liked that the author started the story three years after the initial chain of events that disrupted the two families’ lives—it allows the reader to slip right into the thick of the story and provides a lot of material for strong characterization.

I’ll be anticipating new chapters.

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An Unusual Urban Fantasy

Member: Shutsumon
December 23, 2009

(As always this review is cross-posted from my blog)

This is an unusual Urban Fantasy story.  How is it unusual? Well while it is recognisably part of the genre it doesn’t use the usual suspects, or at least not by name.

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A great start

Member: paulgazis
June 1, 2009

This one grabbed me with the opening sentence.  The characters are interesting, the premise is intriguing, and I was impressed by the way the author was able to develop her characters while meeting the demands of a serial.  This sort of thing is easy in a novel, but in a serial, where each episode must stand on its own, it [more . . .]

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