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The Last Luminii: Empire of Embers by EJ Spurell

 


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Listed: Oct 30, 2008

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A good start

By G.S. Williams, editor, author of No Man An Island

Oct 31, 2008: "The Last Luminii" only has 3 chapters, as of this review, so all that follows is based on those, and subject to change.

But, so far, the story is interesting. It takes place on a world where humans in the ancient past interbred with animals, creating subspecies. Ren, for instance, is a Leonai, bred of man and lion. His people, however, don’t believe the old stories, and claim his tales of Human ancestry are heresy.

The first three chapters hint at a wider history for the fantasy world the author has created, with various species and their cultures. If that hint blossoms into a fully realized epic story, it will be worth reading.

So now we just have to wait for more chapters to see how it turns out.

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