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Eddie’s First Circus by Zoe E. Whitten

What do you give a boy with a 600 pound gorilla? Whatever he wants... 

Months after his step-father murdered his mother, Jessie Mendoza is still trying to come to terms with the memory of his mother’s body.  Living with a bickering father and a step-mother who are complete strangers, Jessie also has to worry about his little brother Eddie, who seems to be slipping farther away from reality.

The arrival of a circus breaks Eddie out of his shell, and, believing he is doing a good thing, Jessie agrees to a trip through the carney sideshows.  Then Eddie talks to a gorilla, and all hell breaks loose . . . 


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Listed: Jan 30, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
January 30, 2010

The first chapter is solid and ends with a freaky twist.  It’s a dark look at a non-conventional family and how the kids are coping.

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Great Introduction to Zoe Whitten’s style

Member: Shutsumon
February 17, 2010

crossposted from my blog

This Wednesday I’m reviewing a short story – Eddie’s First Circus by Zoe Whitten. I’m aware it’s only a couple of weeks since I last reviewed something of hers, but I’ve been suffering from neck pain since Saturday and it’s been interfering with my reading so I needed something I’d already read and which would be quick to review. Eddie’s First Circus fitted the bill. Likes:

  1. This is young adult dark fantasy done right. Serious when it needs to be serious and funny when it needs to be funny. There may be superpowers in this universe, but they don’t solve everything.
  2. At only three chapters long it’s a very good introduction to Zoe’s writing style without commiting to a longer work.
  3. As always her characters are finely drawn. The kids have real problems and seem real.
  4. The emotion really comes through – I empathised with the characters alot.
  5. It’s dark, but it’s also a great deal of fun.

Dislikes:

It’s actually hard to say what I dislike about this story. I could say that the character’s lack development, but it’s a short story and they develop as much as can be expected for that medium. I’ve said before that Zoe’s writing style isn’t for everyone, but I like it, so that’s not really a dislike. There are aspects of the plot that made me sad, but that’s not dislike either.

It’s a long time since I’ve read a story that I honestly couldn’t name one thing I disliked. I’m sure it’s not perfect, but there’s no major issues I can define with it. Verdict:

As I said above this is a short story, and thus an excellent introduction to Zoe’s style. Given her idiosyncratic style this is the story of hers to sample if you are new to her work. Like marmite you’ll either love or hate it.

I give it 4.5 stars because while I hate marmite I love this story.

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