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The Admonishments of Kherishdar by M.C.A. Hogarth

Crime and Punishment in an Alien World 

In Kherishdar, when a person commits a crime, they become their sin. . . . 

Suicide. Rape. Child Abuse. Addiction. Twenty-five crimes. Twenty-five stories. Twenty-five narrators . . . and one minister over them all, to judge, convict and Correct the faulty: the priest who serves Shame.

This companion volume to The Aphorisms of Kherishdar explores the wayward and their journey back to society, offering another glimpse into the Ai-Naidari culture.

A darker, more difficult glimpse—

Without Shame, there is no Civilization.

Note: The Admonishments of Kherishdar contains some graphic violence.



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Editor: Chris Poirier
September 3, 2009

Not nearly as successful as Aphorisms:-(   The subject matter here is heavier, and so suffers more from the format, heavy language, and lack of subtext.  Also, while each vignette in this series is supposed to be by a different narrator, they all sound the same, and everything gets muddled as a result.

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Murky and Ungrounded

Member: M.E.Traylor
August 21, 2010

These stories are not nearly as strong as Aphorisms of Kherishdar, and for me suffer both from stylistic and intellectual approach.

Each piece in this collection is told by a different narrator, so the sparse description and brevity doesn’t have the benefit of building on itself over time. They do build [more . . .]

A Darker Look at Paradise

Member: S. D. Youngren
October 19, 2010

A companion piece to the author’s popular The Aphorisms of Kherishdar, M. C. A. Hogarth’s The Admonishments of Kherishdar explores the darker side of its alien society.  Where the Aphorisms exalts the contentment of the many who fit in, the Admonishments tastes the pain of the few who do not, and, usually, that pain’s resolution.

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Member: MeiLin Miranda
July 27, 2010

I’m only at the beginnings of this, but if it’s half as good as "Aphorisms" I’ll be happy.

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