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I Screwed Up by Pyerse Dandridge

 

Leo Carroll, womanizer and alcoholic, finds himself near Nevada and stuck with a psychopathic Redhead who’s forcing him to abandon his wife and move to New York.  Only problem is, if Leo isn’t home in 24 hours, his wife will take his son to Guam.


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Listed: Feb 12, 2010

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Editor: Linda Schoales
February 12, 2010

The story starts with the narrator walking up in a van with no memory of how he got there.  He remembers drinking with his buddy, and picking up some girls, but now they four of them are parked at a gas station in the desert.  Then his wife calls.

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