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In This Twilight by Al Bruno III

a tale of lost gods and fragile transformations

A world where both dreams and monsters lurk in the shadows, where love and forgotten rituals fight for control of the human heart, and where the madness of eternity can be glimpsed in a single segmented eye. . . .

A collection of stories.
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By NatatBlue, author of The Call of the Seven Peaks

Aug 2, 2015: The writing seems solid, as has been mentioned before, and I would say it has been carefully edited, unlike some internet offerings. If brutally searching for errors, I could find grammatical inconsistencies, but nothing that interfered with reading. The story opens at a high school dance, described with a nice amount of detail. Thelma, our narrator, is neither an outsider nor a prom queen. She, rashly for a daughter of a relatively modern world, goes home with a complete stranger and encounters a bizarre household. I may perhaps be too [more . . .]

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