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By NatatBlue, author of The Call of the Seven Peaks

Aug 2, 2015: The writing seems solid, as has been mentioned before, and I would say it has been carefully edited, unlike some internet offerings. If brutally searching for errors, I could find grammatical inconsistencies, but nothing that interfered with reading. The story opens at a high school dance, described with a nice amount of detail. Thelma, our narrator, is neither an outsider nor a prom queen. She, rashly for a daughter of a relatively modern world, goes home with a complete stranger and encounters a bizarre household. I may perhaps be too impatient, but neither Thelma or Chad compelled me to continue the story. The set up suggests some sort of vampire or extraterrestrial with similar tastes, and for those in search of such work, this writer seems prolific and accomplished.

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By Chris Poirier, editor

Dec 6, 2010: Solid, engaging writing with a clear viewpoint, but pacing is a little on the slow side.

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