The main story was nice and was carried to a logical ending point. It just needed "THE END" and an invitation to return for sequels. Consider it a novella posing as a first portion of a trilogy and it works just fine. No need to keep up a serial, Nicole Spruit needs to just write the next book.

Chapter by chapter online would be fine, with no time lines.

The secondary story never jelled. Rebecca’s story never had a chance. It would be reasonable to skip those chapters as they were never woven into the warp and woof of Riders. Of course if you did that you would miss some fine character development.

There were many styles displayed in the story. A good read and a fine effort, but more of these interesting works need to be written so the fine story teller we’ve met on these pages can develop her own consistent, confident voice.

I enjoyed it.

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