With fifteen chapters to date this story is proving to be a fun filled gem with some interesting characters.  There is no big mystery as to what you can expect – the header gives the game away to a degree and so far the author is delivering as promised.

There is a natural flow to the story and I like the way the characters simmer and slowly reveal hidden skills and personality traits.  Together with humour, conflict and just a hint of romance I think the blend will appeal to readers of all ages.

The story has undergone quite a bit of editing in the past few weeks following a number of reviews and critiques.  This has benefited one chapter in particular but I would hate to see the writer change her style too much and compromise her natural talent in the process.

The design of the site suits the story perfectly.  I love the font used in the header and appreciate the thought that has gone into the layout.  Comments are greeted with open arms and I would not be surprised to see an active fan forum spring up there some day.

If you want to chill out and enjoy a little slice of fantasy then you could do a lot worse than to make your way over.

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