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Starwalker by Melanie Edmonds

A ship's log, as told by the ship

The Starwalker is a starship with an experimental star-stepping drive. Designed to use the gravity wells of stars to fold space, she can travel between star systems faster than FTL. That is, if they can get it to work. She is run by a sophisticated AI who doesn’t always follow her programming.  She has only just been born, and . . .

An ongoing blogfic, with new posts thrice weekly.
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Unknown Transmission by Steve Scearce

A communications specialist in the year 2185 is marooned in deep space by his ship’s assistant (a transgenic fish/humanoid).  Stranded just outside the horizon of a supermassive black hole, he begins to send messages back to record his actions and observations.  A radio astronomer in present-day Antarctica is listening.  Something terrible is about to happen. . . .

An ongoing blogfic, with new posts thrice weekly.
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Hyperlink Your Heart by randomhuman

Until there's nothing left

Out of loneliness, or boredom, maybe, you assign a URL to your heart and share it on the forums and social networks you frequent.  The hits trickle in at first, the unusually curious trampling through, poking and prodding, unsure of what they’re seeing.  But then the links spread.  Everybody wants to see your heart, to have a role in pulling . . .

A growing collection of stories, updated weekly.
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Spectral Shadows by Perri Prinz

Overall Series: Ongoing science fiction fantasy soap opera involving time traveling anthropomorphic animal characters exploring the odd and often controversial social situations that exist on various planets. Currently Active Serial, “The Planet Of Genetic Misadventure”:  The planet Cygnus, once entirely devastated by genetic warfare, has re-evolved a species of half animal people who live in the shadow of the . . .

An ongoing series, with new episodes weekly.
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Caught Somewhere in Time by David Schick

Time is always on my side.

The human race is unknowingly caught somewhere in time, and their very existence is at stake.  They will need a protector who always has time on their side.  This is a novel about how time travel helps save the future of humanity from a fate that no one suspects. . . .

A serialized novel, updating fortnightly.
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Newtons Sleep by Daniel O'Mahony

A richly-written novel of strange happenings in 17th century England

“Don’t tell her what it was like.  Don’t tell her how you had to dig your way out through heavy layers of clay to reach the fresh air, because that would distress her.  Don’t tell her about the box, because that would confuse her. And don’t tell her about the light, because that was sacred.” Lately cannonballs have . . .

A complete novel.
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The Daedalus Transfer by Huw Langridge

A signal from a distant star triggers a dangerous mission to investigate

In the near future a message is received from Proxima Centauri 4.3 light years away.  A massive operation is put into action to build a ship to send a crew of six to investigate the signal.  They arrive after 150 years only to discover that the signal came from a very obscure and unexpected source. . . .

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Timely Persuasion by Jacob LaCivita

A Rock & Roll Time Travel Adventure

Timely Persuasion follows an anonymous music critic on a quest to save his sister from the relationship that ended her life.  After a chance encounter at a bowling alley leaves him with the ability to travel in time, our hero uses his musical knowledge to “blink” through the years attempting to keep the couple apart by any means necessary.  But . . .

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TIMELY PERSUASION

Unfortunately, I don’t need more persuasion…

Editor: Gavin Williams
October 1, 2008

There is a too-often cited "writing tip" and that is "show, don’t tell."  The idea is, you write a scene to "show" readers what you mean, instead of "telling" them. 

So, in simplistic terms, you don’t tell them "he was a nice guy," you show a nice guy:

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STARWALKER

I am loving Starwalker!

Member: Shutsumon
March 3, 2010

Starwalker is the new web fiction project by Melanie Edmonds author of “The Apocalypse Blog” which I reviewed here in the past, and in my opinion it’s a much stronger project.

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The concept. A ship’s log told by the ship [more . . .]

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