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LOITEROUS

Editor’s First Impression

By Chris Poirier, editor

Jul 20, 2015: Edit: At chapter 23, the latent male chauvinism reveals itself for the outright misogyny I was hoping it wouldn’t become, with the major character apparently raping a minor character to punish her for opposing him, and the author chuckling about it in the comments. For me, it’s utterly killed the story. So I’m out.

Original comment: It’s not well-written and it’s about as Mary Sue as a story can get, but it’s surprisingly engaging, nonetheless. If you can get past the fan service and latent male chauvinism.

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