Note: Unfortunately this hasn’t been updated since 2009.  Original review below.

Thomas Bleakly, PI is a crazed, full stop no brakes noir-with-robots adventures that is somewhat reminiscent of Blade Runner, only a lot funnier, a lot more manic, and not a movie.  And after reading 14 parts (2 chapters) I’m hooked on it.

To start out, it seems like a complete farce, a parody of cyberpunk and noir, perhaps.  The jokes fly and it opens with the classic scenario of the dame walking into the detective’s office with a case.  The twist being that the dame is a robot and the detective is more crazed than cynical.  It took me a little bit to really believe in the hype over the character.  I felt like I was being told "Look how crazy he is!" a little too loudly and forcefully.  But the jokes and the ease with which I could read the narration kept me entertained enough to read on.  And Bleakly grew on me, as a character, as the story went on.  He has this insouciant quality in any situation that makes me smile.

The whole thing also picks up, right about the time Bleakly experiences an unfortunate turn of events in Chapter 2 Part 2, which renders him even crazier than before.  That’s when it really starts to get fun.

The PoV shifts are done rather abruptly and I found it confusing every time.  All three PoVs are told in first person and there is no indication whose first person you’re in until you’ve read a bit.  It adds to the manic feel of the story, but I can’t help get a little irritated every time I have to go back and read stuff over because I spent the last few parts in one character’s PoV and was then dumped into another’s with no warning.  It’s like "Haha!  Made ya look!" every time.

Besides that, though, I find the story easy to read through quickly.  There are some run-on sentences but nothing too sloppy, so far.  There’s a lot of funny or elaborate descriptions, fitting in with the whole tone of an extreme over the top punked out noir.

If you’re in the mood for something crazy, comic, noirish, and futuristic, Thomas Bleakly is a good bet.

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